Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Free Write: 1 Million Dollars

If someone gave me 1 million dollars today, I would first put about $150,000 in the bank for my college tuition. The next thing I would do with the money is give $2,000 to the little children across the continent who need it for food, clothes,ect. I would say after making those few transactions with my money I should have approximately $848,000. With that left over money I think that the next thing I would do with the money is spend it all on me. I would buy everything, clothes, jewelry, shoes, ect. Of course i would have to buy a couple of friends some gifts plus my mom, 2 dads, grand parents, brothers and my sisters. That just about closes everything I would do with my 1 million dollars!!




Score:
Focus:4
Content:4
Organization:4
Style:4
Conventions:4

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