Monday, February 2, 2009

Free Write: Family

Family, wow! I don't even know where to start. Okay I'll talk about my mom's side of the family. On my mother's side of the family there's a lot of them. There's so many of them that I think I know most of them. Some of them I haven't seen in years, but others I see often. Besides my mom's side of the family being so big, it's also dysfunctional and has a lot of conflicts. I mean I know every family has it's moments where they have some conflicts, but this family can't even have Thanksgiving dinner together without someone getting in an argument or fight. It's so bad to the point where I actually had a mental breakdown because my mother and second oldest cousin was getting ready to fight!!!!! Now this would not have been the first time, but it's has been that long. On the flip side of all of that negative stuff there is a lot of positive stuff. For instance, if any of us needed help or was jumped there would be like every family member there to ride(that's the up of having a big family). That's my family for you though!!!!!!!!


My Grade:
Focus: 4
Content: 4
Organization: 4
Style: 4
Conventions: 3

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