My perfect vacation would be to go to Disney World. That would really be the perfect vacation. We would fly all the way to Orlando Florida and stay at a beautiful resort and just living life. It would be so fun because aside from me and my family going to Florida, I would have some friends also. Those people would be; Loni, Jaylah, Erica, Dashina, Anjee, Dianne, Kesa, Ashley, and my male friends Aki, Bazir, James, and Marcus. What I would plan for us to do is to go on all of the rides that might be scary, go swimming of course, and above all go shopping! I could see if I can reserve the pool, and then all of the children could have a pool party (that I would be in charge of) while the adults are out having their own fun. That would really be the perfect vacation!!
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